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Friday, June 19, 2009

Our moment together..

Leaning against you with all the fire,
As i come near you having a desire..

A desire to be near, a desire to kiss,
A desire to get lost in you with all the bliss..

I hold you near making you weak in your knees,
I see in your eyes and that urge in them to tease..

Playing with your hair,putting them behind your ears,
I tell you to close your eyes getting even more near..

My hands swirling down from your back to your waist,
I pull your head back as you try to hide it in my chest..

Coming close to your ears, i slowly whisper your name,
I see you blushing and feel your knees getting more lame..

I take my fingers on your chin lifting it up real slow,
I kiss you on your lips as the cupid watches the moment's glow..

Standing on the lines of horizon getting lost in each other,
The beautiful moment for us stops as the world moves futhur..

19 comments:

Adisha said...

Awwww, that was amazing ... didn't like the " going lame " ... but got the meaning ... and it was oh ! soo good ...

Adisha said...

Awwww, that was amazing ... didn't like the " going lame " ... but got the meaning ... and it was oh ! soo good ...

aMaR ~ Immortal words..!! said...

Hey..thanxx..:)

aMaR ~ Immortal words..!! said...

Hey..thanxx..:)

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

hey Amar,

that was a masterpiece.. you covered the bliss so so so so well.. omg! you are a wdonerful poet.. really..

and hey hope that you havent forgotten me.. I am back to blogging.. hope to see you around.

Cheers
Kajal (the pink orchid)

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

hey Amar,

that was a masterpiece.. you covered the bliss so so so so well.. omg! you are a wdonerful poet.. really..

and hey hope that you havent forgotten me.. I am back to blogging.. hope to see you around.

Cheers
Kajal (the pink orchid)

aMaR ~ Immortal words..!! said...

Hey thanks..And yeah i remember you..:-)..

aMaR ~ Immortal words..!! said...

Hey thanks..And yeah i remember you..:-)..

yeshu said...

that was really cool! who's that lucky girl who inspired all ur poems? :)
anyways, cheers! keep writing :)

yeshu said...

that was really cool! who's that lucky girl who inspired all ur poems? :)
anyways, cheers! keep writing :)

aMaR ~ Immortal words..!! said...

Hey thanks..:-)..I'm the lucky one to have her..:-)

aMaR ~ Immortal words..!! said...

Hey thanks..:-)..I'm the lucky one to have her..:-)

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Amity said...

a poet soooo...in love...:)

i like your works, hence i've bookmarked you in my space...:)

please visit me....:)

Amity said...

a poet soooo...in love...:)

i like your works, hence i've bookmarked you in my space...:)

please visit me....:)

aMaR ~ Immortal words..!! said...

Thank you so so much..:-)..I love your works too..And i'm surely gonna see them all..:-)..

aMaR ~ Immortal words..!! said...

Thank you so so much..:-)..I love your works too..And i'm surely gonna see them all..:-)..

Unknown said...

Words failed me whn i find soooo much of passion in this poem..its jst amazing!!!

Amar Ashok Jajoo said...

thanks shruti..!!:)